Sunday, April 12, 2015

Internal Sadness

Never did I blend
Apart, I will always be
Hermit-ted away from society
Did it choose me, 
or I it
A bit of both, conceivably
Externally charming, happy
Internally, 
Sadness cries
Silently


Painting: Defeat II by Yvonee Palermo

This poem was inspired by Magaly Guerrero's prompt: Estranged and Cut off,
a part of NaPoWriMo 2015











2 comments:

  1. Some people seek solitude while others learned to take comfort in it because they had no other choice. And sometimes it's a very cold comfort indeed. Really well done.

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  2. Those first two lines are powerful, Reba. The punctuation does great thing for the meaning of the words, too. So brief and so heartbreaking.

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